toster i think this is fine 4 masters app but
(1) u mite want to say more about ur prior reserch (e.c.t) or the Kahnman thing .. just so it sound like u r not just name drop. those d00ds probably do not no what this stuff is ,
(2) dont say "competitively" and "competitive" in same senteince -- u a synnonym (also u mean "one of the NATION'S") u must b a bad speller!!!
(3) if u can turn down u effluent praise but still get across ur desire 2 go 2 armenia school, then u win... they will no that u want 2 go, so just replace bull shit with human shit u no ?!? so that it more personal, less cover leter
(8) how r we gonna kill self-ware skynet the robot invasion ? this need 2 be ansered for u 2 b a vioble candidate |
