or have one spy, but have him not be really a main charactor, just some dude who helps out duce ex machina towards the end.
more ninajs couldnt hurt. and maybe pirates. yeah, CYBER_PIRATES! and they have to fight ninjas! becuase they are natrual enemeys.
maybe a plot involving some sort of fantastic object, and some people want to get it, and perhaps involve the nazi's somehow (as the bad guys, of course), but have it so that there are TWO factions of bad guys, and they dont like eachother. that way, when your hero (who should be good with non-existant vibro-swardfighting techniques) gets caght with our (get this) NON-BUSTY female lead (she still looks good, but more of an intelectual thing, with glasses maybe), the other faction (russian mafia maybe?) can bust in and have the hero escape in the confusion. thats way better than the way they usually do it.
and make the hero have some fucking backup! i get so tired of this "one man agenst an empire of darkness" crap. when the hero figures out where the bad guys are, he should just order a military strike. while the bad guys all have there hands up with about 70 soldiers pointing AK's at them, the hero should casually stroll in, perhaps melodramaticly sniffing a rose, and then toss it in the trash as he demands to know what OPERATION NUMBSKULL is _really_ about.
the actual nature of OPERATION NUMBSKULL and its mindblowing impact on the world finantial markets is left as an exersize for the reader. |